Prompt 1: Choose a symbol used in a novel or play of your choice and discuss its function in the world of the work.
Finding Stability in the West
In J.D. Salinger’s The Catcher in the Rye, the main character, Holden, is a student who is currently in between prep schools after being expelled for failing too many classes. Not wanting to return home, Holden spends a few days wandering the city where he desperately tries to reconnect with some of his old schoolmates and create new relationships. Feeling lost and alone, Holden turns to disinterested cab drivers, middle-aged tourists and greedy prostitutes looking for companionship with most of his efforts failing. During Holden’s journey back home to his little sister, Phoebe, the reader witnesses Holden’s insecurities and confusion as he faces the harsh realities that come with growing older.
At seventeen, Holden is on the brink of adulthood and about to experience much change in his life. Holden, however, does not want to face this fact and is seeking a place where everything can stay the same. Holden is intrigued with the ducks in the park wondering where they have gone and when they will come back as change is unsettling to him. Oppositely, Holden finds solace in museums as the displays have remained the same since he was a child and continue to remain the same with each of his return visits. Searching for the same stability in his life, Holden dreams of going to the west and living in a cabin. To Holden, the west represents a perfect place where nobody knows him and it gives him a chance to start over.
In his narration, Holden often claims to enjoy his solitude. However, it is evident through his actions that he seeks companionship. Initially, Holden appears to be very judgmental of others, often criticizing the people he meets and acting as though he is superior to them. Further on it becomes clear that he uses this as a self defense mechanism; by making others appear lower than himself, Holden protects himself from getting hurt when those people lose interest in him. Because Holden is very insecure and unsure of himself as a person, going west to a place where no one knows him seems like a dream; Holden fantasizes about pretending to be a deaf-mute when he reaches the west so that he will not have to interact with others or face rejection. Holden’s fear of rejection causes him to feign enjoyment in solitude. This need for acceptance is expressed through his dream of going west.
Throughout the novel, Holden fails to realize that his plan to run to the west is unrealistic. When out on a date with Sally Hayes, an old school friend, Holden first reveals his plan to leave for the west. Holden excitedly proposes that Sally come with him to west where they can get married and live together in a cabin. Holden’s excitement soon turns to anger and resentment when Sally rejects his offer and points out the very realistic flaws in his plan. Not wanting to face the fact that his dream is ridiculous, Holden walks out and leaves Sally on their date. Holden’s consistent refusal to believe that his plan is flawed shows the extent to which he is mentally breaking down. Desperate for an escape from the changes that surround him, Holden behavior has become irrational and his thinking has become illogical. He consistently seeks the west because of his need for control.
Monday, January 11, 2010
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I liked how this was super easy to follow. I loved Catcher in the Rye! It sorted of sounded a bit like a summary though. Good word choice :D
ReplyDeleteGo Lexi! C:. I never looked at this book in this way. This is flows super nicely and what not. I basically got what you were trying to say and my mind wasn't totally frazzled either. Love it.
ReplyDeleteI liked your answer because even though I have never really read the book, I understand what you are talking about and what kind of what happens in the novel. I also liked how you built up to your main point by first explaining the novel and then the relevance of your symbol to your point, that made it much easier to understand. I also like how you could tie in your symbol of the west to so many different aspects of the novel. Good job Lexi I really like it. :)
ReplyDeleteLexi, this piece was very well written. I think that you did a good job of analyzing Holden's character and using the symbolism of the west to expound on his flaws. The only thing I'd like to mention is that it was a little confusing at first what symbol you were trying to explain and I think that for the AP Exam, even though rhetoric and introductions are important, I think that you should make it clear right off the bat what you're answer to the prompt is, if possible. I do understand though that a quick synopsis of the book you choose for this prompt is sort of necessary, so good job on that. =]
ReplyDeleteI'll agree with Noelle in saying that this is very well written and that there is a bit of ambiguity with the symbols being explained. I see Holden possibly being explained as a symbol AS WELL as The West. Nevertheless, both "symbols" are wonderfully explained. Keep it up Sis!
ReplyDeleteLexi!
ReplyDeleteHey! I'm reading Catcher In The Rye! :) I loved your essay and they way you related the symbolism of Holden's dreams to move west to his personality and deeper feelings towards others. I also like how you were able to incorporate the overall plot and the change the Holden experienced as he got older and became a different person.
Amy
Lexi,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave a well thought-out analysis on Holden's character in the novel. I think that by doing that, you helped to explain why the West was so important to him. I also liked how both Holden and the West could be seen as symbols, and that you used something as abstract as "the West" to be the symbol to expound on. Good job! :)
Hi Lexi!!!! I loved the way your essay flowed, you a very good writer! I had a little bit of a hard time finding the symbol, but that's probably just me because i'm a lamo. But yes, your essay is rad!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good blog Lexi. =)
ReplyDeleteYou worded it all very nicely and i could follow everything that you were saying very easily. You gave a really good summary of the book and also explained your symbol and how your symbol affected the story very well. I really enjoyed reading your blog and your summary also got me interested in Catcher In The Rye. =)
Lexi,
ReplyDeleteyou write very well. although this was a very nice plot summary and very informative (i never read catcher in the rye so it was nice reading this) i think you could have addressed the prompt in a more straightforward, analytical manner because I know you mention your symbol, but it is not distinctively clear what the symbol is. I am still a bit confused. but other than that good job! very nice essay
I couldn't help but notice your great word choice. I think it would have helped addressing how the west is related to the description you had in order to not lose the essay's purpose in a few paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteI liked it overall! I liked the booked too lol :)